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My fantastic fan

The furniture I intend to talk about is my fan. I acquired it recently though a purchase on internet.
It means a lot to me because buying this equipment solve many of troubles I was facing.
To get into details I'd like to explain my life without a fan was really hard, because I used to sweat a lot . Take that in consideration I needed to take shower several times a day in order to refresh my body.
I've paid about 225,00 reais to acquired it.Honestly, I think it was a little expensive .
Now I would like citing some advantages and some disadvantages that fan.
It has a remote control . This feature is really nice because I do not need get up and turn it on or turn it off.
The only thing I did not like was the fact it is really big fan and on the other hand my room is very small.

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Richard.Valenziano
My fantastic fan
The furniture I intend to talk about is my fan. I acquired it recently though through a purchase on the internet.
It means a lot to me because buying this equipment
solve solved many of the troubles I was facing.
To get into
the details I'd like to explain my life without a fan was really hard, because I used to sweat a lot . Take Taking that in into consideration I needed to take a shower several times a day in order to refresh my body.
I
've paid about 225,00 reais to acquired acquire it. Honestly, I think it was a little expensive .
Now I would like
citing to cite some advantages and some disadvantages that of the fan.
It has a remote control
. This feature is really nice because I do not need to get up and turn it on or turn it off. The only thing I did do not like was is the fact it is a really big fan and , while on the other hand , my room is very small.
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