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Life is lovely

I think we live our life really monotonously . Acting like robots , running after fake and materialistic pleasures. It does really ruin us in long run. Because all this fame and riches will go away with this fragile body. I think we should take up more free time from our life to enjoy nature , to talk to dear ones , to help not so fortunates , to thank every moment we have been given . Do you guys agree with me ? 😅

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I totally concur. Always be kind before hating, smile before frowning, help before condemning and most importantly live before dying 😀
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Life is lovely Lovely
I think we live our life really monotonously . Acting like robots , ( running after ) [chasing] fake and materialistic pleasures. It does really ruin us in the long run. Because all this fame and riches will go away with this our fragile body. I think we should take up pass more of the free time from in our life to enjoy enjoying nature , to talk talking to dear loved ones , to help helping the not so fortunates , to thank fortunate and being thankful for every moment we have been given . Do you guys agree with me ? 😅
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Thanks matey that's really nice to know where I'm being wrong
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