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The best travel that I ever had

I usually don't travel for different places because we don't have money for this, but, every year me and my mom are going to Minas Gerais, an estate closer to mine here in Brazil.
In one of those travels we decided that we gonna go in an airplane, cause my mom in her 56 years old hasn't never enter in a airplane before. So, I remember the look on her face when we started to fly, she was so happy and it's was great for me and makes me think that how could a simple thing like an airplane can make me and her so happy and make that travel the best.

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What a lovely story. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for sharing your story, it is really touching especially that we are celebrating Mothers Day just this week. By making your mom happy, you became happy as well, that means a lot about how good you are as her daughter. Continue to make your mom happy and she will always treasure those moments with you. Happy Mothers Day to your mom!
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Linda.Quayle
The best travel trip that I ever had
I usually don't travel for to different places because we don't have money for this, but, every year me and my mom are going go to Minas Gerais, an estate closer to mine here area not far from where I live in Brazil.
In On one of those travels trips we decided that we gonna would go in an airplane by plane , cause because my mom in her , who is 56 years old hasn , hadn 't never enter ever travelled in a an airplane before. So, I remember the look on her face when we started to fly, she was so happy and it 's was great for me and makes made me think that how could a simple thing like an airplane can make me and her so happy and make . That was what made that travel trip the best.
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... and made me think how a simple thing like an airplane could make she and I so happy
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