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Day 3 I didn't understand why people likes to work in a Cafe

As a Asian, I don't really like to drink coffee, with weird tasty and causing insomnia , so I barely went to Starbucks or cafe. But this year I started to like having coffee and dim-sums because of my boss. She had nice ground coffee from others and it will pass the expiring date if she didn't drink it. So she asked me to had coffee every morning. In the beginning we liked to add sugar and creamer in it, but gradually we didn't put any sugar and didn't feel bitter taste. Previously I go to cafe , I always see people with laptop working on something, I didn't understand why they not just enjoy the coffee here and work at home? Cafe has many people and sometimes it's noisy. Until one time I had my laptop in a cafe , I ordered a coffee and started to work on my things. Surprisingly, maybe with coffee's help, I had a high efficiency that day. Then I understood even though in Cafe with music on and lots of people sits around you, but since you don't know them , you could focus on your own work. Obviously, other people just to find a public place to discuss on things. Now on weekends, I sometimes go to cafe to work. When I walked in , I saw many young people sits there working on their projects, studying, programming and so on, it makes me feel motivated to work on things. Also I think this phenomenon more often in big cities and this is also why you can tell the city is vibrant. Now please guess what coffee do I like to drink? haha~

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Day 3 I didn't understand why people likes to work in a Cafe
As a Asian, I don't really like to drink coffee, with it has a weird tasty taste and causing gives me insomnia , so I barely went to Starbucks or cafe cafes . But this year I started to like having coffee and dim-sums because of my boss. She had got some nice ground coffee from others someone and it will pass would’ve gone past the expiring date if she didn't drink it. So she asked me to had have the coffee every morning. In the beginning we liked to add sugar and creamer cream in it, but gradually we didn't put any sugar and didn't feel it lost its bitter taste. Previously when I go went to cafe cafes , I always see saw people with laptop laptops working on something, I didn't understand why they not didn’t just enjoy the coffee here and work at home? Cafe has many people Cafes are busy and sometimes it's noisy. Until one time I had my laptop in a cafe , I ordered a coffee and started to work on my things. Surprisingly, maybe with the coffee's help, I had a high efficiency that day. Then I understood even though in the Cafe with there was music on and lots of people sits sitting around you me , but since you don't know them , you could focus on your own work. Obviously, other people just to find a public place to discuss on things. Now on weekends, I sometimes go to a cafe to work. When I walked walk in , I saw see many young people sits sitting there working on their projects, studying, programming and so on, it makes me feel motivated to work on things. Also I think feel this phenomenon more often in big cities and this is also why how you can tell if the city is vibrant or not . Now please guess what coffee do I like to drink? haha~
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thanks a lot
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Day 3 I didn't understand why people likes like to work in a Cafe Cafes
As a an Asian, I don't really like to drink coffee , with . It has a weird tasty taste and causing causes insomnia , so I barely went go to Starbucks or cafe cafes . But this year I started to like having coffee and dim-sums because of my boss. She had nice ground coffee from others and it will pass would have passed the expiring date if she didn't drink it. So she asked me to had have coffee every morning. In the beginning we liked to add sugar and creamer in it, but gradually we didn't put any sugar and it didn't feel taste too bitter taste . Previously Before when I go went to cafe cafes , I always see saw people with laptop their laptops working on something , . I didn couldn 't understand why they not didn't just enjoy the coffee here and work at home? Cafe has Cafes have many people and sometimes it's noisy. Until Then one time I had my laptop in a cafe , . I ordered a coffee and started to work on my things. Surprisingly, maybe with coffee's help, I had a high efficiency that day. Then I understood that even though in Cafe with they had music on playing and lots of people sits around you , but since you don't know them , you could can still focus on your own work because you don't know them . Obviously, other people just want to find a public place to discuss on things. Now on weekends, I sometimes go to a cafe to work. When I walked walk in , I saw see many young people sits there sitting and working on their projects, studying, programming , and so on , it . It makes me feel motivated to work on things. Also I think this phenomenon happens more often in big cities and this is also why you can tell the city is vibrant. Now please guess what : What coffee do I like to drink? haha~
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thank you so much
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