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Development of a teacher

I have attended the seminars, professional talks, and workshops held by HK Education Bureau and Hong Kong Association for Applied Linguistics so that I can acquire creative and modern ways to do high-quality teaching. Also, I have subscribed to several periodicals relating to the subject of TESOL, such as The Asian EFL Journal, so that I can keep myself up-to-date with the latest TESOL information and apply the novel pedagogies I learned from the periodicals to my teaching. Moreover, I always try to apply interesting ideas I find online and make some adjustments to it to meet the needs of my students so that I can deliver productive lessons.

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Development of a teacher Teacher
I have attended the seminars, professional talks, and workshops held by HK Education Bureau and Hong Kong Association for Applied Linguistics so that I can acquire creative and modern ways to do high-quality teaching. Also, I have subscribed to several periodicals publications relating to the subject of TESOL, such as The Asian EFL Journal, so that I can to keep myself up - to - date with the latest TESOL information and apply the novel pedagogies new information I learned get from the periodicals them to my teaching. Moreover, I always try to apply interesting ideas I find online and make some adjustments to it them to meet the needs of my students so that I can deliver productive lessons.
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Excellent work. There was only one real mistake (the last them vs it); the rest are just suggestions. Unless you are intentionally trying to lengthen your sentences to pass a test, I recommend using shorter ones.
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