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A trip to Florianópolis

I wist to describe a awesome trip I did in 2010. In that time I use to wort at techinic at Papaiz groud in Diadema city. So I and mo friends had an idea to travel to Florianópolis at the end of the year. It was I great trip we went by car and back by car, there we stayed at an apartment we rent for a week it was amazing I never knew great beaches like there.
At day we went a beach and drunk some beer at night we went to the club and flarting with some girls.
I knew the best beachs of brasil such as english beach, reconcavo beach, maré beach and jurere internacional beach. We spent about 500 reais in total, I consider this value very cheap. Ok thank you have a nice day

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A trip to Florianópolis
I wist want to describe a an awesome trip I did in 2010. In At that time I use used to wort work at techinic [not sure what you mean here -- " at Papaiz groud a technical school", maybe, or "as a technician"?] in the Papaiz area of Diadema city [again, not quite sure here] . So I my friends and mo friends I had an the idea to travel to Florianópolis at the end of the year. It was I a great trip we . We went by car there and back by car, there and we stayed at an apartment we rent rented for a week it . It was amazing . I never knew such great beaches like as the ones there.
At During the day we went to a beach and drunk drank some beer at . At night we went to the club and flarting , where we flirted with some girls.
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knew know the best beachs beaches of brasil Brazil such as english beach English Beach , reconcavo beach Reconcavo Beach , maré beach Maré Beach and jurere internacional beach Jurere International Beach . We spent about 500 reais in total , . I consider this value to be very cheap good value . Ok OK, thank you , have a nice day !
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