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Going to the supermarket

There are three motives that I can cite about not going to the supermarket: number one, the things that use to buy has increased its price for instance: milk, potato, banana, lettuce, onion, papaya, peers, carrot, apple, steak, chocolate, bread, butter, sugar, rice, cucumber and soda.
Number two: I need to work hard in order to save 200,00 reais.
Number three: When I get inside the supermarket I feel a little confused to find the things that I want.
Indeed, due covid 19 many products has increased its price. It not sounds good to me because I am not employed right now. I am leaving in a poor condition. On the other hand I used to save money to face this sad moment of humanity has faced.
I remember the last day I went to the supermarket was on saturday 24 . I bought soda, icecream , chocolate and chicken .
The next time I am supposing to go there is the next saturday at 13:00 o clock .
My intention is to buy: cheese, eggs, soda, bread, icecream, milkshake, steak, bread, deodorant, watermelon, water, cookies, coffee, lemon, tomato, avocado, sugar and spices.

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I'm so with you on this one... I HATE the supermarket :)
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Aussie.B
Going to the supermarket
There are three motives that I can cite about reasons for not going to the supermarket : number . Number one , the : The things that use I used to buy has have increased its price for their prices. For instance : , milk, potato potatoes , banana bananas , lettuce lettuces , onion onions , papaya papayas , peers pears , carrot carrots , apple apples , steak, chocolate, bread, butter, sugar, rice, cucumber cucumbers and soda.
Number two: I need to work hard in order to save 200,00 reais.
Number three: When I get inside the supermarket I feel a little confused
trying to find the things that I want.
Indeed, due
covid to Covid 19 , many products has have increased its in price. It is not sounds good to for me because I am not employed right now. I am leaving in a It leaves me poor condition . On the other hand , I used to save have saved money to face be prepared for this sad moment of facing humanity has faced .
I remember the last
day time I went to the supermarket was on saturday Saturday 24 . I bought soda, icecream ice cream , chocolate and chicken .
The next time I
am supposing plan to go there is the next saturday Saturday at 13:00 o clock hours, or 1pm .
My intention is I hope to buy : cheese, eggs, soda, bread, icecream ice cream , milkshake, steak, bread, deodorant, watermelon, water, cookies, coffee, lemon, tomato, avocado, sugar and spices.
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Thank you so much for your consideration I wish you have a nice day.
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Linda.Quayle
Going to the supermarket
There are three motives that I can cite about for not going to the supermarket: number one, the things that use to I usually buy has have increased its in price , for instance: milk, potato potatoes , banana bananas , lettuce, onion onions , papaya papayas , peers pears , carrot carrots , apple apples , steak, chocolate, bread, butter, sugar, rice, cucumber cucumbers and soda [if it's a "countable" noun, we usually use the plural in this kind of sentence] .
Number two: I need to work hard in order to save 200
, . 00 reais.
Number three: When I get inside the supermarket
I feel it's a little confused to find confusing finding the things that I want.
Indeed, due
to covid 19 many products has have increased its in price. It 's not sounds good to for me because I am not employed right now. I am leaving living in a poor condition circumstances . On the other hand I used to save money to so that I could face this sad moment of that humanity has faced now faces .
I remember the last day I went to the supermarket was on
saturday Saturday 24 . I bought soda, icecream ice cream , chocolate and chicken .
The next time I am
supposing supposed to go there is the next saturday Saturday at 13:00 one o ' clock .
My intention is to buy: cheese, eggs, soda, bread,
icecream ice cream , milkshake powder [is this what you mean?] , steak, bread, deodorant, watermelon, water, cookies, coffee, lemon lemons , tomato tomatoes , avocado avocados , sugar and spices.
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I am so glad for your correction and consideration . Thanks a lot
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