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I need improve my self-care doing this type of things such as: going to the gim, to buy a new brush teeth, to buy a shampoo to wash my body.
Yesterday I went on a drugstore and bought a liquid bar to take a shower .
To get a good self care a need to get a new girlfriend because it will improve a lot my feelings. I do not have it will improve my confidence and my enthusiasm .
To summarize I need to get a new job. Today Iam a self-employee but I do not have a good profit on it. I prefer to work as a federal worker.
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I need
improve
my
self-
to
take
care
doing
this
type
of
of
myself
better
by
doing
things such as
:
going to the
gim
gym
,
to
buy
a new brush
brushing
my
teeth
,
to
buy a shampoo to wash my body
and
showering
. Yesterday I went
on
to
a drugstore and bought
a
liquid
bar
to
take a
body
wash
for
my
shower
. To
get
a
good
self
care a
improve
my
well-being,
I
need to get a
new
girlfriend
because
it
will
improve
a
lot
my feelings.
.
I
do
not
have
one,
so
I
do
not
have
think
it
would
it
will
improve my
feelings, my
confidence and my enthusiasm .
To
summarize
In
addition,
I need to get a new job.
Today
Iam
a
Now
I
am
self-
employee
employed,
but I do not
have
a
good
make
enough
profit
on
from
it. I prefer to work as a federal worker.
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Thank you have a nice day.
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Improvements
I need improve my self-care
by
doing
this
type
these
types
of things
such as
: going to the
gim
gym
,
to
buy
buying
a new
brush
teeth,
to
buy
a shampoo
toothbrush
and
buying
soap
to wash my body. Yesterday I went
on
to
a drugstore and bought a liquid
bar
soap
to take a shower . To
get
a
good
help
my
self care
a
,
I
need to get a new girlfriend
because
as
it will improve a lot my feelings.
I
do
not
have it will
It
will
also
improve my confidence and my enthusiasm .
To
summarize
Finally,
I need to get a new job.
Today
Iam
a
At
the
moment,
I am
self-
employee
employed
but I do not
have
make
a good profit
on
from
it. I
would
prefer to work as a federal worker.
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Comment(s)
Thank you have a nice day.
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