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My beautiful garden

My garden is a very interesting one. Because there are several types of plants there such as: roses, peones, orchids, snowdrops, calendulas, asters, tulips, blueebells, sunflowers, jasmines, daisys, iris and pine. To be honest my mother has chosen this plants because she fancies so much plants.
I really appreciate sunflowers having in consideration its characteristics : its leaves are yellow, it is big and it is very cool seeing it turning around the sun. Another kind of flower I'd like to cite are roses because it is acceptable in many cases. For exemplo I use to give roses for my mother and girlfriend , they adore this kind of atitude from me.
I want to cite more types of plants that I appreciate as: wild flowers, thistles, herbs, mushrooms, bamboo, palm tree
I think plants in general brings a great atmosphere . I wish everyone had a garden to cultivate plants. Thank you :)

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My beautiful garden
My garden is a very interesting one. Because there are several types of plants there , such as: roses, peones, orchids, snowdrops, calendulas, asters, tulips, blueebells, sunflowers, jasmines, daisys, iris and pine. To be honest my mother has chosen this these plants because she fancies them so much
 plants.
 I really appreciate sunflowers having in consideration its characteristics : its leaves are yellow, it is big and it is very cool seeing it turning turns around the sun. Another kind of flower I flowersI 'd like to cite are roses because it is they are acceptable in many cases. For exemplo example I use to give roses for to my mother and my girlfriend , they adore this kind of atitude attitude from me.
I want to cite more types of plants that I appreciate as: wild flowers, thistles, herbs, mushrooms, bamboo, palm tree
I think plants in general brings have a great atmosphere . I wish everyone had a garden to cultivate plants. Thank you :)
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My beautiful garden Beautiful Garden
My garden is a very interesting one. Because This is because there are several many types of plants there such as: roses, peones peonies , orchids, snowdrops, calendulas, asters, tulips, blueebells bluebells , sunflowers, jasmines, daisys daisies , iris irises and pine trees . To be honest my mother has chosen this all these plants because she fancies so likes plants very much plants .
I really appreciate sunflowers having in consideration its characteristics : its leaves the characteristics of the sunflowers. Their petals are yellow, it is they are big , and it is very cool seeing it to see them turning around to follow the sun. Another kind of flower I'd like to cite mention are the roses because it is acceptable they are used in many cases. For exemplo example, I use used to give roses for to my mother and my girlfriend , they adore this kind of atitude attention from me. I want to cite more More types of plants that I appreciate as are : wild flowers, thistles, herbs, mushrooms, bamboo, and palm tree trees.
I think plants in general brings bring a great atmosphere to the garden . I wish everyone had a garden in which to cultivate plants. Thank you :)
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deleted.89604
It certainly sounds a nice garden. May I borrow your mother to look after my garden?😉 A well written piece don't be disheartened by the amount of "green" most of that was mixing singular and plural together and general spelling errors - so not as bad as it first looks! I would just like to mention: 1) You "used to give roses", so you don't any more? If you still do then use: "I give roses to..." "I often give roses to..." "I sometimes give roses to..." etc. 2) I notice you like the word "cite". This is a very formal word mostly associated with academic or legal literature. It isn't very common in everyday language and wouldn't be used in this type of writing. 3) I presumed you meant "petals" and not leaves on the sunflowers. Here in the UK the petals are yellow and the leaves are green. Unless, of course, they are a mutant variety growing in your garden! 🤔😉 I hope this is useful for you.
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JoaoCarlos.Maximiano
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