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Visiting Rio de Janeiro city.
I want to visit Rio de Janeiro . First of all I am going to mention the Christ the redeemer it is the most notorious point to visit there. If I have the opportunity I'll pass for slum's rocinha and Maracanã stadium.
My intention in visiting Christ the Redeemer statue is adore it. I am from a catholic family from Araraquara city country inside São Paulo State. I know it is an important touristic point known all over the world. On the same hand my soul will fill of hope and peace.
Despite slum's rocinha my purpose is dedicating some time in order to have contact with the culture inside that. For instance: how does this community live and work ? how does they are use to treat tourists there? And what the people living there intend to do in the next 5 years?
To finalize it's s great idea to know Maracanã stadium. I have the same point of view of Christ the Redeemer statue in this case. Maracanã stadium is known in all over the world . So why not visit it and get inside there maybe and play football there. Is not it?
Visiting Rio de Janeiro
My intention in visiting Christ the Redeemer statue is