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What I am and What I suppose to be

I'd like to point it ou by the following manner: right now Iam a self employed and Iam not satisfied with it. If I could switch my carrier probably I would be a doctor.
Let me get across it better. When I was young I did not have opportunity to study a lot . I raised in a poor family and my father divorced from my mother when I had just two months.
Since there my mother raised me and my brother by her own.
So I can not afford a good school , by the way, Iam not good on math .
As a doctor I'd like to be a dentist. From my point of view it has a great carrier . When someone smile from me I feel glad and it is the most important characteristic coming from another person.
I know this profession has a great salary and also I will have condition on take care of my family.
The only thing I'd like to get across is the fact when I was young and went on a doctor I felt so much pain on removing my carie. It was not a good experience but I understood it was fundamental.
If right now I were a dentist I'll be the best dentist from my city . I'll have my own office and my on secretary.

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What I am and What I suppose Would Like to be Be
I'd like to point it ou by the following manner state : right Right now Iam a I am self - employed , and Iam I am not satisfied with it. If I could switch my carrier career then probably I would be like to become a doctor.
Let me
get across it explain this better. When I was young I did not have an opportunity to study a lot . I was raised in a poor family and my father divorced from my mother when I had was just two months old .
Since
there then my mother raised me and my brother by on her own . So , therefore I can could not afford to go to a good school , by . By the way, Iam I am not good on math at maths .
As a doctor I'd like to be a dentist. From my point of view it has this would be a great carrier career . When someone smile from smiles at me , I feel glad and because it is the most important characteristic coming from another person. (In my opinion 😊)
I know this profession has a great salary , and also I will also have condition on the ability to take care of my family.
The only thing I'd like to get across is the fact when I was young and went
on a to the doctor (dentist??) I felt so much pain on removing when they removed my carie tooth . It was not a good experience but I understood it was fundamental necessary .
If
, right now I were a dentist I' ll d be the best dentist from in my city . I'll have my own office and my on own secretary.
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In English there is a distinction between doctors and dentists. They are almost always identified as distinctly different professions. It's never too late to change - you go for it 👍
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