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My First Essay (29/07/2020)

Today I woke up at 9:00, I think. Soon after, I showered and changed clothes.
At 13:00 hours, I started the study with the subject of Mathematics and I got it do a logical reasoning exam. I feel so happy and then I study History and English and now I do my first short essays.

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Well done mate, keep it up
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My First Essay (29/07/2020)
Today I woke up at 9:00, I think. Soon after, I showered and changed my clothes.
At 13:00 hours, I started
the study with the subject of studying Mathematics and I got used it do in a logical reasoning exam. I feel so felt happy and then I study studied History and English and now I do am writing my first short essays essay .

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My First Essay (29/07/2020)
Today I woke up at 9 09 :00, I think. Soon after, I showered and changed clothes got dressed .
At 13:00 hours, I started
the to study with the subject of Mathematics mathematics and I got it do did a logical reasoning exam. I feel felt so happy and , so I then I study History studied history and English , and now I do am writing my first short essays essay .

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09:00 makes it the 24hr clock. If you only write 9:00 it requires either 'am' or 'pm' so people know whether you mean morning or evening i.e. '9:00am'. As I presume you don't shower with your clothes on, you won't have to change anything when finished showering! If you do though, then I can see that changing the clothes would be wise as the others would be rather wet. 😜
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My First Essay (29/07/2020)
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