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Mass shooting in the United States.

My biggest concern at the moment in regards to citizen security in The United States is the growing tragedies brought about by the gun violence and mass shooting increasing in the Nation. House of Representatives and the Senate should work on how to implement laws based on gun ownership in the States.

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I agree upon this , mate
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Mass shooting in the United States.
My biggest concern at the moment in regards to citizen security in The United States is the growing tragedies brought about by the gun violence and mass shooting increasing in the Nation. House of Representatives and the Senate should work on how to implement implementing laws based on gun ownership in the States.
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You start by coming up with a plan of how you will implement something before stepping up on implementing it. That is why I wrote 'how to implement' instead of "implementing'..
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I understand , but english is based more on being correct than what appears prima facie . The part I corrected is sentence wise more appropriate and means the same thing . Regards
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I would humbly suggest that both are acceptable. It's just a matter of style. The original would read better inserting: "work on how *best to* implement laws". The correction would equally read better with an explanation of what is to be done i.e. "work on implementing laws based on *limiting* gun ownership"
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I agree with jon - they are both correct.
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draenog.jon
Mass shooting Shooting in the United States.
My biggest concern at the moment in regards , with regard to citizen security in The United States , is the growing number of tragedies brought about by the increase in gun violence and mass shooting increasing shootings in the Nation nation . The House of Representatives and the Senate should work on how to implement laws based on to control gun ownership in the States.
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Trish.Rutter
Mass shooting in the United States.
My biggest concern at the moment in regards regard to citizen security in The United States is the growing number of tragedies brought about by the gun violence and mass shooting increasing in the Nation the increase of mass shootings . The House of Representatives and the Senate should work on how to implement laws based on the implementation of Federal gun ownership in the States laws .
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This just needed some tightening. The opening stated it was about the US, so further mention is unnecessary unless you’re referring to Federal vs State law. Because it wasn’t quite clear to me, I added Federal because State laws must abide by Federal standards.
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