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I'm writing because i wanna improve my english. I think that this is better way send mensage for my friends that living in north american. Today, i just write this lines, but i'll go increase it with more words in the future.

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I am writing because I want to improve my English. I think this is the best way to send messages to my friends who live in North America. Today, I just wrote those lines, but I will add more words in the future.
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My first Essay here
I'm writing because i wanna I want to improve my english English . I think that this is a better way to send mensage for messages to my friends that living who live in north american North America . Today, i I just write this these lines, but i I 'll go increase it with more words in the future.
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My first Essay here
I'm writing because i I wanna improve my english English . I think that this is a better way send mensage for of sending messages to my friends that living in north american North America . Today, i I am just write this writing these lines, but i'll go increase on increasing it with more words in the future.
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My first Essay here
I'm writing because i I wanna improve my english English . I think that this is a better way to send mensage for messages to my friends that living live in north american North America . Today, i I just write this these lines, but i I 'll go increase it with more words in the future.
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I'm writing because i wanna I want to improve my english English . I think that this is better way will help me send mensage for better messages to my friends that living in north american North America . Today, i I'm just write this writing a few lines, but i'll go But I will increase it with more the number of words in the future.
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