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My new homeland

Hello, i'm living in Gramado, Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. This place is amazing for people who desires to breath a good air and it's a calm place to walk around. There a lot of trees and good places to take a photos. Tourists always come here to visit.

Months ago, i was living at Rio de Janeiro, a world known as "city of samba and beautiful women". I met a lot of good friends there, but in my opinion the city isn't good at all.
It's dangerous, a lot of people wants to mug you at the downtown and the transit is terrible!

I was happy, now i'm much happier than ever.

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draenog.jon
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Hello, i I 'm currently living in Gramado, Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. This place is amazing for people who desires desire to breath a breathe good air and it's for a calm place to walk around. There are a lot of trees and good places to take a photos. Tourists always come here to visit.

Months ago,
i I was living at in Rio de Janeiro, a world known known worldwide as " the city of samba and beautiful women". I met a lot of good friends there, but in my opinion the city isn't good at all.
It's dangerous
, . Downtown a lot of people wants want to mug you at the downtown and the transit system is terrible!

I was happy
then , but now i I 'm much happier than ever.
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"Tourists always come here to visit " sentence is grammatically fine but a better way of saying that is "The city is very popular with tourists " 👍
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Thanks again, I will pay more attention when have to write (I instead of i)
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Lydia.Juerss
My new homeland
Hello, i'm living in Gramado, Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. This place is amazing for people who desires desire to breath a good breathe fresh air and it . It 's a calm place to walk around. There a lot of trees and good places to take a photos. Tourists always come here to visit (though this phrase is technically correct, I would rephrase it as "It is a popular with tourists" or "it is a popular tourist area") . Months ago, i I was living at in Rio de Janeiro, a world known as " the city of samba and beautiful women". I met a lot of good friends there, but in my opinion the city isn't good at all. It's dangerous, a lot of people wants want to mug you at in the downtown area and the transit is public transport terrible! I was happy, but now i I 'm much happier than ever.
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Thanks! "public transport" it would be transit system, with roads, traffic lights, the drivers...
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The entire system would be the transport infrastructure
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