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My Childhood

My childhood was a very interesting time. I remember several good things from there such as: I used to fly kites , play football, volleyball, play marbles, jump hope and going to the creche.
It is cool talking about my childhood because the thing I used to do the most was fly kites, so, I remember I made many types of kites such as; withe with black stripes, blue with red, blue with purple, green with black and several others variations. I remember a time when my kite was lost because my line was broken, in other case other gay cut my line with other kite and my kite disappeared.
Other thing I used to do was play football, to be honest in that time all guys wished to be a soccer play, so , every weekend we get together and play with other friends, the football field we use to call the grated it is near from my house, and this nickname is because it was without grass only red earth.
I did many friends on day care center I think or creche there I began to learn Portuguese and by the way I costumed to play marbles.

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My Childhood
My childhood was a very interesting time. I remember several good things from there back then such as: I used to fly flying kites , play playing football, volleyball, play playing marbles, jump hope jumping ropes and going to the creche crèche .
It is cool talking about my childhood
because the . The thing I used to do the most was fly kites, so, I remember I made many types of kites such as; withe white with black stripes, blue with red, blue with purple, green with black and several others variations. I remember a time when my kite was got lost because my line was had broken, in other case other gay another time a guy cut my the line with other to my kite and my the kite [flew off and] disappeared.
Other Another thing I used to do was play football, to be honest in , at that time , all guys wished to be a become soccer play, so , every players. Every weekend we 'd get together and play with other friends, the football field we use used to call the " grated " it is was near from to my house, and it was given this nickname is because it was without had no grass , only bare red earth.
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did had many friends on at the day care center centre I think or creche it was there I began to learn Portuguese and by the way I costumed continued [??] to play marbles.
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