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Violence against women in Brasil is increasing.

The numerous of assaults against women is increasing in Brasil due to covid 19. The mainly fact of that is occurring is because men are getting struck at home much more than before. Secondly the lack of job.
In Rio de Janeiro Juliana was stabbed by his former boyfriend and had his left hands cut off. She said what triggered it was because he is struck at home because to covid 19. The lawyer of Juliana ex boyfriend said his client is innocent but he is in jail waiting for a trial and he denied his wrongdoing.
As we known this type of situation said above isn't new in brasilian society, but the lack of job is changing the moods . Such swift are requiring a new demands of psychologists but who have money to pay them?
The other case took place in Duque de Caxias Rio de Janeiro's district where Simone was punched on her face by her former husband. There are some police station specialized in acting specifically on this cases but the demands are rising so much and is worrying the authorities.
In order to solve this problems federal governor needs to get as soon as possible the maximum number of vaccines around the world. Without this measure this moment will turn worst and worst. Besides that, mayors need to provide psychological accompanies to approach this cases and mitigate them.



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Violence against women Against Women in Brasil Brazil is increasing Increasing .
The numerous number of assaults against women in Brazil is increasing in Brasil due to covid COVID- 19 . The mainly fact and the lack of that is occurring is because employment. These are both causing men are getting struck to be stuck at home much more than before.
Secondly the lack of job.
In Rio de Janeiro Juliana was stabbed by his her former boyfriend and had his her left hands hand cut off. She said what triggered it was because he is struck stuck at home because to covid of COVID- 19. The lawyer of Juliana 's ex - boyfriend said his client is innocent , but he is in jail waiting for a awaiting trial , and he has denied his any wrongdoing.
As we
known this know the type of situation said outlined above isn't new in brasilian Brazilian society, but the lack of job jobs is changing the moods mood . Such a swift are requiring a new rise of cases places extra demands of on the psychologists , but who have has the money to pay them?
The other case took place in Duque de Caxias
, a district of Rio de Janeiro 's district , where Simone was punched on her in the face by her former husband. There are some police station departments specialized in acting specifically on this in these cases but the demands are rising so much and that it is worrying the authorities.
In order to solve this
problems problem the federal governor needs to get as soon as possible the maximum number of vaccines from around the world as soon as possible . Without this measure this moment the current situation will turn worst and worst go from bad to worse . Besides that, the mayors need to provide psychological accompanies support services to approach this intervene in these cases and mitigate them.



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