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My best friend

I remember my best friend called Vanessa. She was a beautiful girl who lived with her parents and brothers. We used to travel to the beach in our vacations and we enjoyed a lot those moments together.
Unfortunately nowadays we don’t see each other and I don’t know nothing about her and her family. But I made others friends who are as special as Vanessa was.

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My best friend Best Friend
I remember my best friend called Vanessa. She was a beautiful girl who lived with her parents and brothers. We used to travel to the beach in on our vacations , and we enjoyed a lot those many such moments together. Unfortunately , nowadays we don’t see each other , and I don’t know nothing anything about her and her family. But I 've made others other friends who are just as special as Vanessa was.
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