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My best friend
I remember my best friend called Vanessa. She was a beautiful girl who lived with her parents and brothers. We used to travel to the beach in our vacations and we enjoyed a lot those moments together.
Unfortunately nowadays we don’t see each other and I don’t know nothing about her and her family. But I made others friends who are as special as Vanessa was.
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My
best
friend
Best
Friend
I remember my best friend
called
Vanessa. She was a beautiful girl who lived with her parents and brothers. We used to travel to the beach
in
on
our vacations
,
and we enjoyed
a
lot
those
many
such
moments together. Unfortunately
,
nowadays we don’t see each other
,
and I don’t know
nothing
anything
about her and her family. But I
've
made
others
other
friends who are
just
as special as Vanessa was.
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